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    Default A bunch of us asians got together to make a short film - EK1 (2018)

    Its our first short film, we know its not perfect but please let us know what you think. We take criticism pretty well :)

    Its about a near homeless person dealing with drama between him and his girlfriend.




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    Pretty cool, very relatable story line


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    Quote Originally Posted by dbg5050 View Post
    Pretty cool, very relatable story line
    Thanks, appreciate it!


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    Looks pretty good, Nice Work Guys!


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    You need some sound editing. The dialogue between the man and the girl, the sound level gets low at times, high at others. On the cuts you might want to fade the sound out and in rather than just go to a different loudness level.


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