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    Hi Friends!
    Im Cinema31297,a 20 year old student.This is my first ever short film.It belongs to science fiction genre.I hope you all will love the screenplay(especially).

    It's my pleasure to share this with you guys out there!
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    Thank you!! Watch and tell me whether you like the short film or not ? i want to get it reviewed :)


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    Lightbulb Bubbles-PART 2 To be made (Alll Suggestions are welcomed)



    Hi Friends!
    Im Cinema31297,a 20 year old student.This is my first ever short film.It belongs to science fiction genre.I hope you all will love the screenplay(especially).

    It's my pleasure to share with you guys out there!
    Watch it.Like,Share & Support!(If you like it)


    Im planning to make a sequel to this short film.The storyline is somewhat complicated and i dont have time and money to shoot the sequel now.I have plans on making it as a webseries,feature film,or anything else....like Bubbles(Series/Franchise/....) in future.Because, the story is so flexible.

    Watch and share your opinion friends.Lets Discuss.



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    I like what you did. The only criticism I have is the subtitles are OK for short lines but are not on long enough for an English speaking person to read them on any of the longer ones. It seems you have timed them to match the dialogue, but not long enough to be read. You may have to lengthen the time of some sequences in order to do that.


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    Quote Originally Posted by bobspez View Post
    I like what you did. The only criticism I have is the subtitles are OK for short lines but are not on long enough for an English speaking person to read them on any of the longer ones. It seems you have timed them to match the dialogue, but not long enough to be read. You may have to lengthen the time of some sequences in order to do that.
    Thanks alot bro!
    I too felt the same way when i made the subtitles.i will try to fix it.btw,are you an indian? I'm asking this bcoz you said'english speaking person'.


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    You're welcome. I'm not Indian, but I watch a lot of foreign films on Netflix with subtitles. Indians tend to speak English more rapidly than Americans. When the data center I was working for in the US transferred operations to India, I helped bring the Indian data center on line from the US, and when the Indian techs would call me to ask questions they spoke English too quickly for me to understand, so I would ask them to send me their questions by email and would reply by email. I probably should have said American audiences, since people speak English all over the world.

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    BUBBLES

    I really like the varieties of the color green as a dominant hue of the settings.
    And the movement of the calendar's pages concealing the parallel universe.

    Very good work, cinema31297.
    ... ... ... ...

    Last edited by Marks; 10-20-2018 at 11:33 AM.

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    Quote Originally Posted by bobspez View Post
    You're welcome. I'm not Indian, but I watch a lot of foreign films on Netflix with subtitles. Indians tend to speak English more rapidly than Americans. When the data center I was working for in the US transferred operations to India, I helped bring the Indian data center on line from the US, and when the Indian techs would call me to ask questions they spoke English too quickly for me to understand, so I would ask them to send me their questions by email and would reply by email. I probably should have said American audiences, since people speak English all over the world.
    oh okay bro.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Marks View Post
    BUBBLES

    I really like the varieties of the color green as a dominant hue of the settings.
    And the movement of the calendar's pages concealing the parallel universe.

    Very good work, cinema31297.
    ... ... ... ...
    Thanks alot bro! :)


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    Quote Originally Posted by Marks View Post
    BUBBLES

    I really like the varieties of the color green as a dominant hue of the settings.
    And the movement of the calendar's pages concealing the parallel universe.

    Very good work, cinema31297.
    ... ... ... ...
    you have sharp eyes bro."did you noticed anything else(especially in the first 4 mins)?"
    i want to discuss more about my short film with you.
    can you pm me your mail id ?


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    OK, cinema31297
    We'll be in touch.

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    https://www.scribd.com/document/3922...play-Breakdown
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    https://drive.google.com/file/d/1WgS...ew?usp=sharing

    HI GUYS!!
    I Have made a breakdown of my short film.Do kindly read it!
    It will help you get a better understanding of the story.
    Thank you!


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