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  • Camp-Tastrophe: Short comedy- feedback appreciated

    Hi, this is my newest comedy short, I'm quite proud of it but an feedback or constructive criticism would be gratefully received.

    Cheers

    A dumb witted camper unknowingly unleashes a demon capable of destroying the world. [3:30]

    http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=TNedGLyA2ds

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    Nice job! Here is what I thought: Some of the cinematography could have been a little better (at times.) The acting was decent, but could have been better. The editing was really great, and that pacing was good too. The VFX were good almost the whole time, but some of the (Action Essentials?) elements looked a little fake. The music and sound design was good. Keep up the good work!
    -AF

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    • #3
      Thanks for the reply. Yeah you guessed it- action essentials. I see what you saying regarding the action essentials stuff. To be honest I struggle most of the time to ever make them look any good.

      Thanks again

      Will

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