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    I''m an old guy (74) but even at my age there is a time for new things. This is my first attempt at making a movie... any (positive) criticisms or tips would be appreciated

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    I'm also an old guy (72) and enjoy making videos for youtube. I wonder what camera and lens did you use? My main criticism is that your pans in the cockpit are way too fast (like 2:53 to 2:56). Those fast pans could have been edited out or you could have used a wider angle lens with a much slower pan. Whipping the camera around is hard to watch.

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      Welcome to Filmmaker Forum!
      Screenwriter and script consultant: www.maralesemann.com

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        Hi OldStick, I liked your movie. But then again I'm also a pilot, I just sold my Cessna 172 last week after being an owner for thirteen years! I'm here as a music provider not a film maker so I'm not qualified really to offer you film making tips. My production music is at https://www.pond5.com/artist/Studio_Nine_Productions
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          I am a little younger than you (my age is 62), and I enjoy the documentary film you shot.
          I like the skies and the clouds,... you made them become restless.

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          I write movie scripts. I posted some of them here in Filmmaker Forum. You can use any of them, or mail me if want new plots.

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          What about people writing movie scripts on an airplane on an endless flight ?

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          Last edited by Marks; 08-28-2019, 04:06 PM.

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