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  • TheNerdCreations
    started a topic Feedback and Critique wanted!

    Feedback and Critique wanted!

    TheNerdCreations is proud to present it's first Short Film of the Summer!

    The First Part of a two part Short Film

    Feedback is welcome!

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Jxg09tVS2Co

  • Tommy Bond
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    Acting was good, lighting needs improvement. This is something that is common in producing films and videos.

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  • Director
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    How did the guy in the chair go from looking all cleaned up, to bloody and beat up without that taking place in the film? Did I miss something? Got to be more careful with continuity. Same thing with when he spit in the guy's face. Where did the blood in his mouth come from?

    On a short film, keep the opening titles fast, I started to lose interested before it even began.

    Always open with a killer scene. The guy walking through the garden with a cup of tea wasn't engaging enough, shocking enough, powerful enough for an opener.

    I liked the gritty black and white.

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