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  • Feedback and Critique wanted!

    TheNerdCreations is proud to present it's first Short Film of the Summer!

    The First Part of a two part Short Film

    Feedback is welcome!
    Creator and Head of TheNerdCreations

  • #2
    How did the guy in the chair go from looking all cleaned up, to bloody and beat up without that taking place in the film? Did I miss something? Got to be more careful with continuity. Same thing with when he spit in the guy's face. Where did the blood in his mouth come from?

    On a short film, keep the opening titles fast, I started to lose interested before it even began.

    Always open with a killer scene. The guy walking through the garden with a cup of tea wasn't engaging enough, shocking enough, powerful enough for an opener.

    I liked the gritty black and white.


    • #3
      Acting was good, lighting needs improvement. This is something that is common in producing films and videos.