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  • The Girl with the Golden Chain (2017)

    Hey,

    Here's a short film-noir we've just finished.

    https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=T1UblKaJBzA

    Any feedback or thoughs would be appreciated. (I'm aware the voice-over sound quality could be better at moments).

    Thanks

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    The monochromatic look is nice. I was having a hard time hearing the VO over though and for me that is a almost a non-started. Audio is more important then visual.
    Also when he is thinking about the girl etc, why not shoot her instead of just showing him on the steps? I think that would make it much more interesting.
    Good luck!

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