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UniqueAmI
07-28-2012, 07:48 PM
Check out this scene. This is the first full scene where we get semi-acquainted with our heroine Nancy Nelson and her room-mate Shari.

INT. NANCY’S BEDROOM - NIGHT
Nancy poses in the mirror. She holds her hair back.
She doesn’t pay attention to a door OPENING and CLOSING.
She removes her shirt and tries on another. She pulls her hair.
Shari stops in the doorway.

SHARI
Date with Pee Wee?

Nancy jumps.

SHARI (CONT’D)
Sorry.

NANCY
What do you think when you see this?

Nancy poses.

SHARI
School teacher.

Nancy slumps.

SHARI (CONT’D)
No, no. Old maid.

Nancy plops on the bed.

NANCY
Thanks.

SHARI
What? You want me to lie?

Nancy starts to cry.

SHARI (CONT’D)
Oh my God, Nancy, I’m sorry. I’m sorry.

She rushes over and holds her.

NANCY
I just want... I want...

SHARI
I know honey. I know.

Shari holds her till Nancy pulls away.

NANCY
A hundred and ten auditions in eight months and I’ve landed two walk-ons.

SHARI
I know. I know it’s tough. It’s called paying your dues.

NANCY
I must be paid till 2020.

SHARI
Come on. What’s this part about?

NANCY
Her name is Melissa and she’s from the mid-west.

SHARI
Good start.

NANCY
She comes to New York to be an actress.

SHARI
Nancy, this is your life.

It's pretty basic. This is a love story between Shari who is a lesbian hot for Nancy. We played it like that.

I'm going to put up a video soon of my directed version, and the new director and executive producer's version. Both are rough edits. The new version rougher than the original.

The sound for both is off the camera and not the real recorded version. But, it doesn't matter.

You'll notice a difference.

UniqueAmI
07-29-2012, 09:10 AM
If you've read the first post, than you'll understand this video. After the "new version" there's some excellent footage they added. It's priceless if you enjoy absolute crap.

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