View Full Version : Jarred - My first short!

07-10-2012, 03:01 AM
Here's a link to my first proper short film. It's called 'Jarred' and it's about a caretaker working at a factory called 'Spade's Manufactory'. It isn't quite finished yet and the editing towards the end is still pretty rough, but it'd be great to get some feedback!

Jarred 2nd Rough-Cut on Vimeo


Nick Soares
07-10-2012, 09:12 AM
Watching now

07-10-2012, 11:52 AM
Not bad man. Your audio could use a little work, but I understand it's a rough cut.

Nick Soares
07-10-2012, 11:56 AM
I thought it was interesting, I really enjoyed the color correction (if there was any, im assuming there was)

The "look" was good too. What did you shoot on?

07-10-2012, 07:12 PM
Cheers guys

Yeah it was pretty heavily colour corrected, I wanted it to be green and overwhelming, oppressive as possible. Tried to match that up with the inertia of the atmosphere within it.

I shot it on a 5D mkII, a 60D and a 500D, edited it on FCP 7 and the audio was done on Logic.

07-16-2012, 12:22 AM
** Sound editing was done in logic, video wsa done in FCP 7, only just saw this mistake sorry.