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UniqueAmI
12-07-2015, 05:06 PM
This is an actual feature (though it's only 53 minutes). I'm still pondering the very end. But, I would appreciate any input on the piece as a whole.

Here's a few things to keep in mind:

1) This should have been much longer. I had to remove a major relationship and sub-plot. Though it works without it.

2) I didn't handle the camera, so there's nothing to really say about the shots.

3) Sound is not complete. It's certainly listenable. But, I know there's work to be done. If the cut is complete, it'll be going to a real soundman to work on.

4) Most of the music is stolen. It has been flagged on youtube. Hopefully they haven't muted any of it. But, once I'm done editing, I'll be working on music.

What I'm really interested in knowing is "does it work as a movie?" Is there too much dialogue? Does it drag? Does it suck?

Any input would be appreciated. As an incentive there is some slight nudity.

See it before they remove it.

Thank you in advance. Now go get some popcorn.


https://youtu.be/UDheNc8gW5E

UniqueAmI
12-07-2015, 10:08 PM
Oh and for the film buff, cult classic director Joel Reed (Bloodsucking Freaks) is Mr. Peterman.

Mick Scarborough
12-07-2015, 11:00 PM
Blood sucking Freaks FTMFW!