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Celluloidsimple
04-22-2015, 03:04 PM
Hey Film Friends,

Check out this new PSA I made about literacy. Better learn to read!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=df9B5t8_NZQ

Thanks for watching!

Tony

UniqueAmI
04-22-2015, 09:17 PM
It's cute.

These are just MY notes. Take'em or leave'em.

This was fairly mean. It could have been a little meaner.

The delivery of the painter chastising the guy could have been better. He even fumbled a line and it's there.

I'm sure you didn't spend days shooting this, so it's fine. But, if the delivery was spot on nasty and rude it'd be that much better.

I like nasty. Which is pretty obvious.

Celluloidsimple
04-23-2015, 02:26 PM
Awesome, thank you for watching. Much appreciated!

Yeah, I get what you mean. It's a fine line a was trying to walk about being mean. It's always helpful to hear everyone's thoughts.

Nick Soares
04-23-2015, 02:52 PM
FUN

Celluloidsimple
04-23-2015, 02:54 PM
FUN

Cool, thank you for watching!

Aaron Jones
04-23-2015, 10:05 PM
Nice, It will hit home to those that have ears to hear...

Celluloidsimple
04-25-2015, 07:54 AM
Thanks Aaron!