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Felix
05-09-2012, 06:42 PM
Title: Aberrant (meaning: departing from an accepted standard)
Logline: Two friends can't decide how to dispose of the woman they kidnapped.

Set in an apartment, plus the complex parking lot, the story follows two young males who have come to an impasse: neither know what to do with the woman they've kidnapped. One being the fiance, the other the woman's sister, their differing views create havoc and tension.

With twists included, this low-budget feature would be ideal for a small crew and people looking for a fun opportunity. Special effects needed and collaboration would be great to increase the quality of the script.

Havey
05-10-2012, 12:35 PM
I guess I am just reading this wrong Felix, but it confused me a little. Can you reiterate what you said a little to see if I can understand it a little more lol.

Felix
05-10-2012, 04:22 PM
I guess I am just reading this wrong Felix, but it confused me a little. Can you reiterate what you said a little to see if I can understand it a little more lol.

The two male protagonists are best friends. Call them Bob and Jim.

Jim has a sister named Lisa. The two guys have kidnapped Lisa. Bob is Lisa's fiance.

Make more sense?