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dutchmoviecreators
12-16-2013, 11:08 AM
Hello guys!,

Today we have a video uploaded '' The Game'' we would like to know what you thought of it tips are always welcome!
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=VOrkeQcijlM
Thanks!!

The DutchMovieCreators

Anonymous Filmmaker
12-16-2013, 12:01 PM
Cool. Make sure you maintain focus, and try cutting around a little more to different angles. The music was great. Don't put a vignette on during movement. Watch your framing, etc. Overall was entertaining to watch!

emmhor
12-16-2013, 01:28 PM
The effects are kinda bad. The acting is not the best but oke.
Like Anony said good music

Anonymous Filmmaker
12-16-2013, 01:48 PM
The effects are kinda bad. The acting is not the best but oke.
Like Anony said good music
I would have to disagree, or at least differently phrase what you said about the effects. The muzzle flares were roto-ed in excellently. The blood hits were so-so. Those graphics in selection were fine, but could have been much more complex. You seem to have the skill, just take it too the next level by adding more and more elements so it looks more refined.

dutchmoviecreators
12-16-2013, 09:41 PM
Thank you all, I will use all your tips in my new videos!

TQ Productions
01-18-2014, 12:14 PM
Fun video, I liked the concept and I didn't mind the effects. I would pay close attention to the audio, sometimes the background noise, sfx and dialogue are not balanced well. Cool music. If you need music for an upcoming project please keep me in mind. Here is a link to my composing demo:

https://soundcloud.com/timquickmusic/tim-quick-film-scoring-demo

Best,

Tim
http://www.timquick.net