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Boogermanfilms
11-16-2013, 01:18 PM
This is the trailer for my new video coming out soon. Its one of my best trailers. Tell me what you think!

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-vfHWffQ1Xo&feature=c4-overview&list=UU2r2ZZbUu1fEd3Sbd880_bQ

filmmaker6563
11-16-2013, 02:35 PM
Not bad! Although there are some things that can be improved.

The first thing is music. In the opening scene with the text and "prepare for battle", some action/adventure/thriller music would really add to the film. The music already in the trailer (can't put my finger on who the artist is...) seems like a strange choice. Some sound effects and quicker editing might help as well. When the kid is punching at the camera, some quicker editing and grisly sound effects would really add to the scene and make it more powerful overall.

But, well done! You seem like a talented young filmmaker and I wish you the best of luck in the future!