View Full Version : Music video of Mine

07-13-2013, 10:20 AM
Here is a video for my song 'Day Dreamin'' I edited the video myself and co-directed it. I had a friend of mine at B&E Productions shoot it. I would love some feedback. The song is is off of my first album 'Write of Passage'. Let me know what you think!


07-13-2013, 12:59 PM
I liked it, seems like you guys used an old camera, when did you film this?

Anonymous Filmmaker
07-13-2013, 03:14 PM
Pretty cool. I'd try to stay away from camera movement aside from pans and tilts though, some of the zoom makes it look a little amateur. Also, a little more coverage would be good. That way you can cut to more angles of the rapper. I like the overall scenes going on. If you work on the pacing a little, the chase scenes would be even more exciting. Overall, very nice work and I can't wait to see more!

07-13-2013, 06:28 PM
That was really good. I was especially impressed by the musical and lyrical quality of the song. I also like the symbolism of the story portrayed in the video: running away from himself. Are you the musician in the video?

I agree with Anonymous Filmmaker about the movement and zooms tho.

As a personal opinion and style, I would have cut the footage a lot more too... and I mean a LOT more. While a huge amount of cuts may not be ideal for a scripted movie, in a music video it works, especially when you line up cuts to the beats and rhythm.

Good stuff man. I've subscribed to your channel and liked the video on Youtube! :-D

L A Morgan
07-13-2013, 07:17 PM
Good rhymes and I really like your message. Cool twist in the end, your saving yourself.

Chan Walrus
07-13-2013, 10:42 PM
You have a really nice voice and sound. :)

07-14-2013, 10:22 AM
Thanks, It was filmed a couple years ago and on a budget. Unfortunately I don't have the capital for a truly professional camera (yet) haha. Thank you for the feedback!

07-14-2013, 10:22 AM
Thank you for the feedback! Appreciate the kind words!

07-14-2013, 10:23 AM
Thank you :)

07-14-2013, 10:27 AM
I appreciate the detailed feedback, yes I am the musician in the video. This song being from my first album, the quality of the music has evolved since but I will definitely use the video advice from everyone for my next video.. That was actually only the 2nd music video of mine I ever made.. And all Im working with for that is pinnacle studio 14.. Someone else shot this video but the camera I own is very cheap as well.. I am excited to someday upgrade to something more legitimate.

07-14-2013, 10:55 AM
Here are two more of them you guys would like to see any more. Both of these are a couple years old and the shadows video I shot and edited by myself in about 2 hours. Definitely not super professional quality as far as video quality but I felt both told an excellent story.