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kevinAvis
03-06-2013, 05:59 AM
That's a short film I've made in two hours,written,directed and edited by me. I will post more later...


http://vimeo.com/61174647

Jfvideos
03-06-2013, 02:44 PM
Not bad. Felt like a david lynch movie that was scored by john williams.

Charles
03-06-2013, 02:53 PM
Hey Kevin, was this your first short?

kevinAvis
03-06-2013, 02:54 PM
Thank you, you are too lenient. I've made it under some restrictions,like not using soundtrack but only sound effects and no camera movements or dialogue.

kevinAvis
03-06-2013, 02:55 PM
This is my second short.