View Full Version : Critique my short script please

Vance Baryn
03-05-2013, 10:44 AM
Hello folks,

This is a film that is going to be made this month as part of a project I have started to finish one short film every month. I would love to have feedback on it so that it will be the best movie it can be. It's only 10 pages so should be a quick read. I would be happy to read and critique other's short scripts as well in return.



Nick Soares
03-05-2013, 11:37 AM
Hey Vance, please use the attachment system here and not links to sites for downloads.

Click, Update Post

Click, Go Advanced

Below in "Additional Options" Click, Manage Attachments button.

Vance Baryn
03-05-2013, 04:46 PM
Thanks for telling me how to do attachments, Nick. Wish I knew that last night. Would have saved me time looking for a place to host the file. :-(

03-05-2013, 05:00 PM
I will def read your script in exchange for you reading mine!!

Vance Baryn
03-05-2013, 08:21 PM
Sure. How can I get yours to read?

03-06-2013, 05:32 AM
Sure. How can I get yours to read?

I can email it to you.