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    Screenplay: America Love Story

    Author: Junsai Xu

    Main Logline
    The defeatist harbored her bitter hatred, never stopped defrauding, injuring, revenging, caused a huge debt pressure, forced the gainer to fall deep into a strange circle, ruin her life,discharge a repayment,viciously cycle,be desperately driven;but the defender dedicated himself to launching a rescue, in pollution and purification, in erosion and perfection,in degeneration and contention,changed a love tragedy into a love drama,thus bulged the significant society problem of triggering the sickness overgrowth,reducing the life quality,endangering the human development.

    Assistant Logline
    The life perplexity of an epoch,complicated puzzlement,extraordinary heaviness: for the sake of immigration,the protagonist had no choice but to part with his cohabitant in China,and wouldn’t reunite with his son in Canada from beginning to end, unexpectedly lost his wife in America at the eleventh hour; or the affection became incomplete, being filled with grief and indignation; or it’s only difficult to maintain the relation, the prospect isn’t cheerful; he felt depressed in humanity, so much so that he wouldn’t bear to think of the past and considered that the reality isn’t entirely satisfactory.

    Plot Overview
    Dazhi Tang caressed Joanna, made every effort to help her give up smoking, give up drinking, commit to drug rehabilitation, stop gambling, conceal murder abortion crime, engage crisis,avenge by bravery,finally formed different endings.

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    It appears you have a very complex story for a drama, but I would suggest that you find someone who is better at English than yourself. With difficulty I can follow the information you are trying to communicate but not very well. If you know someone who speaks English better than you, you may want to have them rewrite your Loglines for you.

    Good luck.

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    Quote Originally Posted by Steve Olander View Post
    It appears you have a very complex story for a drama, but I would suggest that you find someone who is better at English than yourself. With difficulty I can follow the information you are trying to communicate but not very well. If you know someone who speaks English better than you, you may want to have them rewrite your Loglines for you.

    Good luck.

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    Merciful Steve, thank you!

    No grammar's error, no wording's deviation, no spelling's misconduct, it's just to conform to the scientific English writing rules. Enough!

    I published more than 50 academic papers on magazine above province grade, and published a novel (more than 450,000 words). I'd already finished a dissertation (more than 300,000 words).I can finish a press of 1,000 words in an hour, including making title, proof and so on.I can write 6,000 words in academic paper one day. So my logline is very profound, very classic, very excellent.

    I have 1, thesaurus; 2, antisense dictionary; 3, polysemy dictionary; 4, phrase dictionary; 5, dictionary of idioms; 6, dictionary of grammar; 7, English-Chinese dictionary; 8, concise dictionary; 9, abbreviation dictionary and so on as reference. So I can solve any language translation problems.

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    To remedy our short comings we must first be able to identify them.


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    Quote Originally Posted by Steve Olander View Post
    To remedy our short comings we must first be able to identify them.


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    Great Steve, I salute you.

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    Main Characters

    1.Joanna (European descent):graceful incarnation. Blonde, curves gallop, devil figure, the most beautiful who would make wild geese to alight and river fish to dive for gaze. As clean as ice and as pure as jade. Insists on preserving the love in purity, nobility, nicety. When she appears at the age of nineteen.

    2.Dazhi Tang (Asian descent):being knowledgeable, seeking truth from facts, extremely strong and handsome. He's a newspaper man in China. Becoming a dealer after immigrating into the United States. Highly emphasizing the problem of life quality. His maternal grandmother was the French. When he appears at the age of forty-five.

    3.Catherine (European descent):looking just like Joanna's eldest sister on appearance. Her personality is similar to limpid, trickly, warm water. Ardently loving her descendant with all her heart. When she appears at the age of thirty-nine.

    4.Margaret (European descent):being out of order, low in character. Beautiful, but being too thin, much bad habits. She regards younger female cousin Joanna as the rival in love. She never stops waiting for an opportunity to revenge. When she appears at the age of twenty-three.

    5.Christopher (European descent):originally being a bank clerk. Releasing from prison after serving his sentence, ingratiating himself with Margaret, became plotter and accomplice. When he appears at the age of thirty-eight.

    6.Yangyang Tang (Asian descent):the son of Dazhi Tang and his ex-wife Beilei Hua. When he appears at the age of eleven.

    7.Amy Tang(half-blood):the daughter of Dazhi Tang and Joanna. When she appears to be a neonate.

    8.Beilei Hua (Asian descent):Dazhi Tang's ex-wife. When she appears at the age of thirty-seven.

    9.Shuier Li (Asian descent):Dazhi Tang's cohabitant. When she appears at the age of thirty.

    10.Wharton (African descent):Dazhi Tang's friend. When he appears at the age of twenty-six.

    11.Shirley (African descent):Dazhi Tang's friend. When she appears at the age of twenty-one.

    12.Whitefield (African descent):Dazhi Tang's friend. When he appears at the age of fifty.

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    SYNOPSIS

    1
    When Dazhi Tang was doing his long distance running exercise, recognizing Margaret and Joanna. Because he frequently had the agile competition with Joanna, thereupon they became friends little by little. Afterwards, he scented, Margaret smoked too much herself, and also drove Joanna to imitation along with her.He conceived the idea of wanting to break off their friendship.

    2
    Both Margaret and Joanna became aware of good impression on Dazhi Tang secretively. Therefore, obviously suffering a leaving them out in the cold, Margaret smoked less, then Joanna straightforwardly quitted smoking. Hence Dazhi Tang resumed his association with Margaret and Joanna. In the end, Dazhi Tang had a strong admiration for Joanna, went hand in hand by both of them, gave Joanna a big hug. The result directly made Margaret fulmination, anguish, furiousness. While Catherine showed her sincere favour on Dazhi Tang.

    3
    Joanna first arrived in Shanghai, being in contact with Shuier Li of Dazhi Tang's cohabitation ex-girlfriend, thus greatly experienced marriage culture, apparel culture, custom culture, and so on in China. Afterwards, Joanna specially went to Toronto, visiting Yangyang Tang, the son of Dazhi Tang and his ex-wife Beilei Hua. Facing alternative livelihood, she expressed her perplexity, contradiction, tolerance in a certain degree.

    4
    The time looked also like a running water after marriage. Dazhi Tang requested Joanna to go to library for reading thereupon. Where does know, to the later, Joanna became an honoured guest in bar. Dazhi Tang urged Joanna to quit drinking, Joanna didn't listen. Dazhi Tang had only to take measures, forcing Joanna to be unable to stand. She gave up drinking at last.

    5
    Joanna became a cashier in supermarket. When their life had been restored calmly, the evil claws have unsheathed again, castting a disaster that lasted a few years. During this period, Joanna conducted an induced abortion, three times of the detoxification living in hospital successively. Vigorously Dazhi Tang kept forging ahead from beginning to end. As well as, under the help of Wharton, Shirley, Whitefield, and so on friends, going to rescue a fiasco in great lengths.

    6
    There's the termination of suffering hardship finally. Amy, their healthy, lovely, darling daughter, was born. Grandmother Catherine took great care of granddaughter Amy in dedicating herself wholeheartedly. This fact had been affecting Dazhi Tang deeply, superadding for together morning and night in a zero distance, both sides could hardly restrain themselves from revealing the true state of their mind. But it triggered off wind, storm, surge.

    7
    Dazhi Tang and Catherine insistently considered this disturbance as being restricted within the explanation of their heart knot.But from an instinctive reaction, Joanna always held the grudge and refused to forgive. In order to revenge herself for this matter, unexpectedly walked into a casino, lost in a complete mess, caused a lot of damages. In the end, Joanna brought about the whole family life falling into great difficulties.

    8
    In order to pay off a large gambling debt, Joanna went to restaurant once again and returned to her former career as a waitress. But her income wasn't high, and she repaid slow. Joanna suffered pressing repeatedly from the creditor. In having no alternative or in hopelessness, unexpectedly Joanna deliberately or unconsciously participated in conspiracy, evil, crime. For this reason, the family has already showed the disassembly crisis tendency significantly.

    9
    Joanna was continually making mistakes, certainly hasing her subjective reason. But these things occurred in the black curtain behind, It was Margaret who had conducted the obstruction, the mischief, the injury throughout. Margaret pursued the retaliation principle that if it's unavailable and it's just destructive. She contrived to pound the marriage which had brought Dazhi Tang and Joanna together for a long time. And the accomplice exactly was heartless, cruel, malicious Christopher.

    10
    On the one hand, Dazhi Tang proceeded the reflection deep; On the other hand, realized the actual situation. He simmered with rage, rose up by resistance without negotiations, utilized a wolf and a jackal for being too greedy of gain, designed drawing a snake out of its hole, paid off an old grudge really and truly. But even dealing with thus, still formed the very different endings in three kinds of content that has happened, that is happening, that may occur and so on.

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    Theme Song:Going To Extend

    1
    We have a long distance run on Greenwood Avenue,
    We love each other on Greenwood Avenue.
    Your speed looks like a fast meteor,
    Your figure is more delicate and charming than rose.
    Suddenly, you suffered the charge of a furious storm,
    You fully lost your orientation.
    After that,I sought you by all manners or methods, but being utterly ignorant,
    I took a tearful leave from this grieved area.

    2
    We have a long distance run on Greenwood Avenue,
    We love each other on Greenwood Avenue.
    You once was an athlete,
    Now you’ve ridden a rolling chair instead of walk.
    Phoenix reviviscence needs a tenaciousness,
    Here is the home of the brave.
    My plan absolutely isn’t a dreamland,
    I ask you to step a new journey again tomorrow.

    3
    We have a long distance run on Greenwood Avenue,
    We love each other on Greenwood Avenue.
    You resisted the sordid infringements by your youth,
    You’ve safeguarded your holy pureness and nobleness.
    My name is Amy, dad and mommy love me(Amy sings);
    So long as grandmother has leisure,leading me on a run.
    Cheering and laughing are flying upward(Chorus),
    The road of our life is going to extend.

    We have a long distance run on Greenwood Avenue(Chorus),
    We love each other on Greenwood Avenue。。。

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    Fade In

    ·Title·

    Harmony Pavilion.
    Carved Stone.
    Title:America Love Story
    Going To Extend sounds.
    Aerially views the area.
    The cast list.
    Greenwood Avenue extends.
    Subtitle:Spring 2008, Bethlehem, Pennsylvania.
    On Greenwood Avenue, run, skateboard,walk, cycle, dribble,play.
    The cast list.
    On the lawn,there's a woman.She throws frisbee.The dog jumps,opens its mouth, holds in its teeth,and then delivers it. Circulates.
    Going To Extend ceases.

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    ·Upperpart·

    Screen 1

    1,EXT.GREENWOOD AVENUE-DAY  
    Dazhi Tang marches.
    MARGARET
    (winking)
    He's come over.
    JOANNA
    (warming up)
    You see, I want to exceed him more than eight hundred meters today.
    Dazhi Tang arrives, says hello, invites practice, Joanna and Margaret start. Dazhi Tang is behind. Margaret stops.
    MARGARET
    (gasping out)
    Joanna is an athlete. Can you catch her up?
    DAZHI TANG
    Let me try.
    MARGARET
    I’m afraid not.
    DAZHI TANG
    Really? Originally, lady first. Now, I candidly admit defeat.
    They have gimme five. Dazhi Tang runs.

    2, EXT.CROSSROADS-DAY
    Come across a red light. Joanna stops. Dazhi Tang closes.   
    DAZHI TANG
    I've observed, you had the rules. Ran two or three steps, breathed out one time; ran two or three steps,breathed in one time. Are you a proficient?
    JOANNA
    Can't equate. But in the fact, I liked a long-distance running in Freedom High School, and a third in five thousand meters competition.
    DAZHI TANG
    Extraordinary!
    JOANNA
    Thank you!The green light is on. Let's start. Follow me, don't lag!

    3, EXT.GREENWOOD AVENUE-DAY  
    Dazhi Tang accelerates. Joanna doesn't pay attention, obstructs after discovery.
    JOANNA
    (embarrassing)
    Hello! Man, should you make a concession to this girl?
    DAZHI TANG
    (dodging)
    Hey! Big missy, do you understand there seems fraud in the arena?
    JOANNA
    Dazhi Tang,pretended,snuck a attack,counted for nothing!
    DAZHI TANG
    Joanna,don't worry, take it easy, you'll win!
    Dazhi Tang crosses the road. Joanna comes across a red light.

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    Screen 2

    4, EXT.GREENWOOD AVENUE-DAY
    JOANNA(V.O.)
    Dazhi Tang, did trick, how annoying!
    Dazhi Tang runs out the bushes.
    DAZHI TANG
    Scud, have you led the running again?!
    JOANNA
    (seeing elsewhere)
    You’d apply a scheme. I can't fight you.
    DAZHI TANG
    Just kidded around, didn't take it seriously. I'm behind you, you’ll win again. Now,please turn about.
    Joanna does according to the request.
    DAZHI TANG
    Big missy, big beauty, big champion, we conduct Olympic Games Award Ceremony.
    Dazhi Tang offers wildflower.Joanna smells,runs. Dazhi Tang follows.

    5,EXT.HARMONY PAVILION-DAY
    With a cigarette in her mouth,Margaret applauds. Joanna sprints. Dazhi Tang canters.
    MARGARET
    (stretching thumb)
    How about? Is Joanna very powerful?
    DAZHI TANG
    (making a bow with hands folded in front)
    I've received your prompt. A really and truly extraordinary skill!
    JOANNA
    You're modest. I belong to inaccurate designation!
    MARGARET
    Joanna is 1.65 meters,but her legs are very developed; your height is 1.85 meters, obviously trends thin. Therefore, there's a difference in the strength between you and Joanna.
    DAZHI TANG
    You're an analyst, put it right.
    JOANNA
    Stop!Margaret, not so loquacious.

    6,EXT.HARMONY PAVILION-DAY
    MARGARET
    (being unhappy)
    As an athlete, Joanna worked hard, hasn't she been? Then I was a coach and referee, could it be said that it’s not important? Why have I got less?
    DAZHI TANG
    (laughing)
    I'm sorry. Originally being the same. Because you smoked a bit much, so I deliberately reduced one piece. Now can I give you it?
    MARGARET
    Just about right. Tell you, Dazhi Tang, both of us are cousins, we are friends too. So you must treat us equally!
    DAZHI TANG
    All right! I'll pay attention to this problem.
    Joanna gives Dazhi Tang a reel.
    JOANNA
    You haven't had. You're thirsty too, quickly eat.
    DAZHI TANG
    You're very kind. To be honest,you don't understand. In peacetime, I wouldn't touch.
    Dazhi Tang returns the reel to Joanna.
    DAZHI TANG(CONT’D)
    Because,World Health Organization has got the conclusion after investigation:there's a harmfulness to be addicted to sugar, more than smoking. If consume the food of high sugar content long, human health will be damaged.
    Margaret and Joanna look each other.

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    I would give serious contemplation to filtering your content through an interpreter. This will allow your ideas to translate smoothly and is necessary for the crowd you're presumably speaking to~ Other wise your approach may seem a little avant garde, or intentional (and not particularly in a good way).

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    I already tried to communicate that to him. He assured me he has mastered the language:

    "No grammar's error, no wording's deviation, no spelling's misconduct, it's just to conform to the scientific English writing rules. Enough!

    I published more than 50 academic papers on magazine above province grade, and published a novel (more than 450,000 words). I'd already finished a dissertation (more than 300,000 words).I can finish a press of 1,000 words in an hour, including making title, proof and so on.I can write 6,000 words in academic paper one day. So my logline is very profound, very classic, very excellent."

    How can anyone argue with that? ;)


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    Quote Originally Posted by CJM Sandman View Post
    I would give serious contemplation to filtering your content through an interpreter. This will allow your ideas to translate smoothly and is necessary for the crowd you're presumably speaking to~ Other wise your approach may seem a little avant garde, or intentional (and not particularly in a good way).
    Language is the tool that human beings use to transmit information. The aim is to enable each other to communicate effectively.

    Using language,the key point is focussing on accuracy. Because language is a survival tool that everyone must master. So its accuracy is essentially science. Namely must scientifically eliminate the mistake in grammar, words and spelling.

    I think, a man who can master language skillfully must be a writer or scholar who is good at writing.

    But if he can't write any work, that only proves he doesn't know anything about language science. Therefore, there is absolutely no his voice in the field of language and writing.

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    O Henry (1862—1910)had an unmatched and noble status in the creation of short stories. But in the same time, how much and more than thousands of elites were there in English subject? Then in the fact, no any scholar suddenly proposed that he'd want to dictate, ghostwrite, overwrite for O Henry's works. Because if something happens like this, whom should these short stories's copyright belong to so ?

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    Someone of Qi worries in case the sky should fall?

    Help himself first, take out his work! Then no work, no voice. Otherwise, jealousy, not discriminative.

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    Someone of Qi worries in case the sky should fall?

    Help himself first, take out his work! Then no work, no voice. Otherwise, jealousy, not discriminative.
    What does this mean?

    Check out my blog on my experiences as an indie screenwriter and producier:
    http://moreorlessonmovies.blogspot.com/
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    According to the language science,you must need some proofs, then you can point out my screenplay, what went wrong in the text?

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    Language science emphasizes accuracy only. The rest is not in the academic discussion category!

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    If it's wrong, I will accept your criticism with great sincerity. If that's true, I won't have a second to follow your posts.

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    Quote Originally Posted by redbluewhite85 View Post
    According to the language science,you must need some proofs, then you can point out my screenplay, what went wrong in the text?
    According to the science of language you must provide some evidence, then you can point out the deficiencies of my screenplay; that which is inaccurate or improper grammar.


    "No grammar's error, no wording's deviation, no spelling's misconduct, it's just to conform to the scientific English writing rules. Enough!
    No gramatical errors, no improper wording, nothing misspelled. It's all one has to do to write appropriately.



    The defeatist harbored her bitter hatred, never stopped defrauding, injuring, revenging, caused a huge debt pressure, forced the gainer to fall deep into a strange circle, ruin her life,discharge a repayment,viciously cycle,be desperately driven;

    The antagonist was filled with bitter hatred. She never ceased defrauding, injuring, and seeking revenge. The anguish of it all caused this once successful woman to tumble into a bizarre realm where she found herself penny-less and her life ruined. Now she finds herself driven more than ever to strive for that which she desires, which only continues to lead to her ruin.

    That is the best I can understand from what you've written in this last example.


    If a number of people, whom speak your second language as their first, suggest that you have areas in your writing that could use some improvement...then those people, for whom English is their native language, may be correct.


    To remedy our short comings we must first be able to identify them.


    I hope this helps.


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    I have read more than 3,000 books. Know how to engage in learning, write a paper, go to court, there's no evidence that won't work. So, if there is no evidence, take a coping attitude, just keep silence.

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    The network provides a platform for users, and increase its popularity, should be a winning business altogether. There are a lot of network and millions of users in the world. Both sides have the right to choose. About this, no doubt, be well known.

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    Maybe understand this you will.

    徐俊赛曾在伯利恒的金沙赌场度假区工作,担任桌上游戏经销商。

    他与客户辩论。他和他的老板辩论。

    在三名监督员被解雇后,他甚至激怒了一名听取了失业补偿申请的国家裁判。

    星期五,英联邦法庭小组裁定,有足够的证据显示徐氏记录的遗体变为故意不当行为,使他不符合失 业救济资格。

    如Bonnie Brigance Leadbetter高级法官的意见所述,徐先生在娱乐场工作的四年内一再提出违纪行为。

    Leadbetter指出,赌场的雇员手册禁止工人对客人或同事进行争吵或粗鲁的行为。

    然而,在2013年12月,法官写道,当他没有遵守老板的命令时,他被告知不服从的书面警告。他于2014 年2月再次发出警告,因为对客户不礼貌,与上司有争议。那八月份,他再次被引用为争吵和对客人发誓,虽然有 人指出,一个客户开始对抗。

    虽然徐先生被警告说,另一个失误会让他被解雇,他在2014年10月在赌场的地板上与三名监事进行了辩论, 其中一人建议他将手放在游戏桌上,根据Leadbetter 。那时候,徐被斧了。


    Leadbetter指出,国家裁判认为,徐先生在赔偿案件的随后上诉聆讯中粗暴无礼。

    徐浩说,裁判对他是有偏见的,国家法官发现他得到了公平的听讯,否认失业救济是合理的。他的论点是,他不应 该质疑他的手位置是否平息。

    “因为他因为不正确的反应而被解雇了,他是否相信他应该首先被纠正是无关紧要的,”Leadbetter写 道。

    Hows that for a screenplay?

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